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Monday 9 November 2020

Automation

 

Mega city

 WALT: Write a narrative

Success Criteria: I will

  • Write in first person - I, We OR write in third person about Jack and Harry.

  • Use dialogue

  • Use vivid verbs and amazing adjectives to bring my characters to life.

  • Express emotion through my words.


Hi I am Harry and I have an owner named Jack. We live in the Megacity the buildings are really really tall but some people love this place but me I want to live in the countryside. I think that's what Jack called it. He doesn’t talk much, but everyday we go out onto the street.  Jack plays the prettiest music with his guitar.

We wait and wait and wait until someone gives us a shiny item then we continue waiting and sometimes when people drop a shiny item I run and catch it in the hat then I run back it is amazing and a lot of fun we do this for about an hour everyday we have been saving up for a while now we are planning to go to the countryside we have a picture in our dog house of the countryside we finally make it to the place with green I am so tempted to eat it but jack gives me a hard stare so I just poke it then run and then try to eat a butterfly it tastes like butter.