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Thursday 11 March 2021

Narrative writing

 Narrative Choice board Activity:


Here you will need to pick on from each of the following.

One Character, One Item and One setting.

When you have these, you then will plan and write a Narrative using ALL THREE.


Remember to:

Plan effectively

Use amazing adjectives and vivid verbs.

Be creative, use your imagination.


Character Doctor

Item bag

Setting carnival



It was a dark and stormy night. The carnival was closing for the night, citizens were pouring out of the carnival to get home. Later that night some teenagers were sneaking about. They broke into the carnival and began their scheme to spray paint and trash the place. A man had just finished work in the hospital he was headed home, then he heard some commotion coming from the carnival he went to go and check it out but the gate was locked so he assumed it was just a cat or something as he walked away from the carnival he heard a cry for help he quickly spun around to see what was there and saw a man then nothing.


Everything was black he couldn’t see anything. He then opened his eyes and saw himself in a colorful room, he looked around and found a red bag laying on the floor he picked it up and it was really heavy but he managed to put it on his back he observed his surroundings and saw a old wooden door, he approached the door with caution he slowly opened it and peaked inside of a gap in the door and saw that the door lead outside he then completely opened the door and stepped outside he was in the carnival he saw that the gate was still locked. So how did he get in here he thought, whatever or whoever brought him in here didn’t want him leaving he looked around for some sort of clue on who brought him in the carnival. 


He went back into the room that he woke up in and there was an envelope on the ground that said the Great Escape he opened the envelope and inside of it said FIND THE REST in big letters with a clown face next to it. He left the room thinking about what  said and the scream he heard before he was taken “were there other people in here two” he said to himself. He began exploring the carnival and found footprints leading to a carnival stand, he followed them and approached the stand with caution he peered over the front of the stand and saw a teenager behind the stand curled up in a ball hiding the man asked what his name was “Nathan” said the teenager “Mine is Joe, Nice to meet you nathan” “same here” said nathan “Come with me let’s find your friends'' said Joe Nathan leaped over the stand and began following Joe “so what happened” here said Joe “well me and my friends were gonna trash the place and do a bit of graffiti, but out of nowhere this clown looking guy came at us laughing and then I just woke up behind that stand with nothing but this key” then nathan held up a key it was a rusty golden key with a pattern on it in the shape of a clown “I also just woke up I was in the room over there with this backpack” as Joe pointed to the colorful room “and what do you think the key is for'' said nathan “dunno but I’m guessing it is to get out of this place” “ also where do you think your fro…” “HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!” came a voice from what seemed to be the ferris wheel “oh no it’s him” said nathan “who” “him!, the one that put us here” “RUN!” shouted joe they both sprinted away, they went and sat near the merry go round and looked around they couldn’t see the clown but they didn’t think it was gone, and they were right soon the clown was close he was looking around. 


Joe took a good look at him and saw that he wasn’t your average clown he had sharp fangs and was holding a hammer, Joe picked up a rock and threw it as far as he could away from him the clown seemed to hear the rock land and ran that way, that was Joe and Nathan’s chance to run they ran over to another room similar to the one that Joe woke up in but it was all dark they then looked around and found one of Nathan’s friends “Bob are you okay” said Nathan worried, Bob stumbled to his feet and said “I’m fine a little bruised but fine” “Thank god” said Nathan “who’s this” said Joe “Bob nice to meet you” said bob “Nice to meet you to names Joe now back to what I was saying, do you know where the rest of your friends would be” said Joe “No but there’s not many left just Leo and Mike” Nathan explained “okay let’s get moving” To be continued….


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